Day 3.5: “Bunny (part two)”
I have been posting my original designs to an album on my Facebook Timeline as well as my blog, and several of my friends gave me constructive criticism. I made the suggested edits to yesterday’s design.
I changed the shadow on the tuft of hair so that the perspective is consistent with the shadows on the feet and carrot top. I also brought the stroke that forms the mouth in front of the teeth. And, finally, I eliminated the carrot flakes from the front of the mouth and just put the eaten carrot in the bunny’s hand.
I like the new design better. The details are minor, but they make a big difference.